№81355[Quote]
The primordial son flees full of sadness and despair,
running towards the breeze, away from the communal flare.
He ends up in a frozen zone barren from life, full of rue,
and sits atop an icicle throne to try and think things through.
The cold is swift and sharp, cutting through skin like a knife
and the primordial son cries out in pain, longing for an end to his life.
But as the numbing cold ravages the son's body, a new warmth fills his chest acting as a shoddy.
A warmth that doesn't judge, doesn't betray, doesn't hurt or destroy. Like when the stomach rumbles in order for the void to cloy.
The primordial son cries again not of sadness, but of cheer:
"Finally, I'm saved!" he said "My salvation is here!"
The wounds never closed, turning darker, almost rotten but he cares not in the moment, for his pain is seemingly forgotten.
And so he lives a freezing life deceivingly nice and warm
and dies thinking to himself: "I'm not in Hell, but at home."
№81356[Quote]
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№81357[Quote]
unqiue
№81360[Quote]
I'm a 60IQcel but this is really good
№81369[Quote]
I like it. Running away from the commune but dying on a throne alone.
I wrote one a week ago too.
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History has been stuck in 45,
No new answers just some old.
Obsessed about camps of pasts, death drives and SS.
The past is captured by the future
And the future is obsessed by the past.
Maybe the end is near?
Avant Guard or Avant Grade politics which one is new?
I think I'm getting lost.
So is Christ here or are we waiting?
Avant Guard politics is dead, no one's in parliaments,
Before them lay 50 dead.
Avant Grade politics is new what does it do?
It's non-existent.
Don't think of jumping in high places, death really hurts.
A teacher responds by llm's to homeworks of llm's.
School's a control institution.
That's just devolution!
So what's there to do, laying in death?
What not to do laying in death.
Cyber cycles cycle around,
Yet there is an end?
Or maybe time just doesn't pass,
And I'm already dead.
To find answer is neigh possible nor can questions be asked in truth!
You don’t know that’s just absurd.
I need an answer.
A flower that will never bloom.
Pick one out and hold it true.
We need something new.
№81446[Quote]
>>81369>Avant Guard or Avant Grade politics which one is new?That is such a good line. Nice poem all around
№81447[Quote]
i'm a sub 50iq shitskin and i don't see a point in this
№81494[Quote]
>>81446It's an idea I have been toying with for a while. A kind of new political idea that isn't vanguardism but something else, something new. Something that goes beyond the old world and terms of politics, something beyond it all. A kind of post-politics that stands for first grade ideas and solutions.
It may be a much too hopeful idea that I could find what it actually stands for but there must be a way forward that isn't the current slopullist direction. The direction where the many march for a death pit while pushing the few into it first.
№81533[Quote]
>>81494>stands for first gradeThat didn't come out right. I meant high grade ideas or something
№81849[Quote]
>>81360>>81447demonstration of the bell curve