/soy/ - Soyjaks

post 'lotl now

>>18893371
here

its niggerrape

>>18893376
luntik looking ass

>>18893388
trust the process

>>18893392
GEEEEEEEEEG

>>18893376
xheir name is Alice btw

she looks like she's going to rot in a basement for the next 5 years while you make a visual novel that no one will ever play. start coding or stop posting.

>>18893461
i have coded a little bit of the game but its in very rough shape

If you have good writing skills dodis I wanted to play some kind of romantic game for a long time but they all suck

>>18893503
from what i've shown to some of my friends, they say that the game has good writing, so maybe i can pull dis off idk

vp

post a sample of the script or stop larping as a developer. if the dialogue is as autistic as the character design it might actually be worth playing.

>>18893568
here's a part of the script:

>oh right, we share first period
>H-hey, what the fuck?
>why is she sitting next to m-me?
>C'mon joseph don't shit yourself just yet…
>you can do this, its just talking to a girl
>God, why can't the teacher just get in here faste-

LILITH: U-um hey
LILITH: Di-didn't know w-we shared first period

>Fuck me…

JOSEPH: Same

>fuck now what?
>thankfully for me, someone opens the door, please god let it be the teacher
>oh… its another student
>the shark guy slowly moves to the side, sitting right behind infront of us


LILITH: O-oh, hey Dylan!
DYLAN: Hi Lilith!
DYLAN: Long time no see!
LILITH: y-Yeah, same
DYLAN: sooo, what you've been doing?
LILTH: Oh, N-nohing, just been reading all summer, you?
DYLAN: Oh that's nice, y'know i've been really getting beer pong
LILITH: Ooooh, what's that?
DYLAN: Just a small party game where you bounce balls into a beer cup, nothin special
DYLAN: Oh sup dude, didn't notice you!

>is he… talking to me?
>…
>OH SHIT HE IS TALKING TO ME
>OHSHITOHSHITOHSHITOHSHITOHSHIT-
>FOCUS JOSEPH, FOCUS!

JOSEPH: Uhh, you're welcome

>FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK

DYLAN: Pfft, thanks man

>…
>what?

DYLAN: don't worry about it man we ain't judging you

>ok now i feel skeptical
>i fucked that up, i thought he was laughing AT me, not with me


DYLAN: Anyways, names dylan, what's yours?
JOSEPH: Joseph
DYLAN: Ay, i know a guy also named joseph
DYLAN: Wanna be friends?

>Normally i would say no
>after all i embarrassed myself like a moron
>but… guess since he didn't instantly call me a loser, guess i'll take it

JOSEPH: Sure, i guess
LILITH: Wanna, uhm, a-also be friends
JOSEPH: I-i'll think about it
LILITH: Aww…

>>18893586
What the fuck is this

this is genuinely some of the most painful dialogue i’ve ever read. it perfectly captures the essence of a social recluse who hasn't spoken to a real human in months. please keep going, it's so bad it's actually peak.

>>18893668
so its good?

>>18893682
Depends on what you mean by good

It’s good in the sense that it’s a visceral, unfiltered look into the mind of someone who genuinely doesn't know how to exist in a social setting. It’s cringe-inducing, but that’s clearly the point. If you lean into the awkwardness and don't try to make it "cool," you might actually have something here. Just don't make the shark guy too likeable or you'll lose the vibe.

>>18893781
got it, thanks for the feedback man