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Look at them –
How they dance in the rain.
How he twirls her,
And she smiles as she spins,
And the two part for a moment,
Connected by the suspension of their arms,
Their fingers interlocked,
The consummation of their hands –
But the space between them shrinks again,
Merely shrinks,
As it did ebb into existence and away,
As part of this graceful dance.
His look of confidence as he manipulated her so.
The way her feet wobbled on,
And wobbled off balance,
And the smiled still
Because she felt secure.
№17822907[Quote]
and the smiled still? esl poet
№17822924[Quote]
>>17822907it's my first draft. you're my editor now. thanks!
№17822949[Quote]
>Look at them –
>How they dance in the rain.
>How he twirls her,
>And she smiles as she spins,
>And the two part for a moment,
>Connected by the suspension of their arms,
>Their fingers interlocked,
>The consummation of their hands –
>But the space between them shrinks again,
>Merely shrinks,
>As it did ebb into existence and away,
>As part of this graceful dance.
>His look of confidence as he manipulated her so.
>The way her feet wobbled on,
>And wobbled off balance,
>And the smiled still
>Because she felt secure.