/soy/ - Soyjaks

the "foidraper"

Thea hail awakens to find herself tied up in a dark basement.
>what's happening? where am I?

a tall, dark figure walks out of the shadows. "The PSD Predator."
he is very broad and looks like he benches a large amount of weight.
at last… you're here.
>what? let me go! my parents and friends know I'm missing. the cops will be here anytime soon.
no one's going to find you here. that's good for me, bad for you.
>please… I haven't done anything to you. do you want money? I'm sure we can figure something out.
Money's not what I want. What use would that be? I want justice.
>but I haven't done anything wrong!
she begins to cry.

there's no use. you've already done it. all that's left now is to get punished for it. You know what you did. acting like that in the ring, making all those poor fans believe they had a chance with you. then what did you do? you slept around with everyone in the locker room. don't you have even a little bit of shame?
>I'm sorry… I didn't know, I was stupid then. I won't do it again, just let me go, please…
I wish it could work that way. You're such a pretty girl, it's going to make me sad to have to hurt you. but rules are rules.
>He then starts to give her the "PSD special." the scene fades to black.

is ts a good gimmick, in your opinion?