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Need help improving a song
Hello sharty! I'm trying to do a splinter disstrack, however I feel like this song doesn't really rhyme, any ideas for how to improve it?
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>We are magapedos, oh yeah that's right
>invading shitholes is what we do every night
>We are worse than Modin, kim and Putin
>Because we are killing all the Iranians, alright!
>My name is Trump and I'm from New York
>I spent most of my money on legal battles
>I started this whole movement giving false promises
>And I lied to everyone because they were such fools!
>my name is Kash Patel and I'm pushing 50
>mess with me and my FBI will do you dirty
>I love police filled with Indians in
>it reminds me of the old America where I'd meet em every minute!
> My name is Netanyahu, and my mossad loves blackmailing with little girls
> Everyone seems to forget that we actually did that
>Yeah I'm a pedo and with the minors I've scored
>I'll let maga correct those little brats!
>My name is Kristi and I am a bitch who does lots of plastic surgeries
>I have little dogs being shot on my calendar
>Why do you care about this, it's MAGA culture though
>Tried to find the files but my birthdate was too soon
>We are magapedos, oh yeah that's right
>invading shitholes is what we do every night
>We are worse than Modin, kim and Putin
>Because we are killing all the Iranians, alright!
>We're gonna bomb iran
>When things go wrong we'll do the blamin'
>And gotta have a convicted felon as our supreme leader
>Our entire existence is just plain uncanny
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meds netenyahu isn't maga
β17226711[Quote]
>>17226690He controls all of American politics anyways
β17226726[Quote]
too similar to the original schlog freestyle
β17226742[Quote]
>>17226711yeah he owns america why are you downgrading him just maga
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nusoi why are you gigaquoting it…
β17226760[Quote]
>>17226726my main inspiration tbf, if I change it too much it loses the essence
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Niggrer