>>1006122Schrodinger's Cringe to me right now hence I don't know what it could be. But hey I'm gonna trust your instinct and respect your privacy. If it means much, well, ideas are always improved by having a good foundation in writing. I've actually been studying writing for like 3 years now. It's pretty cool, and it'll help you remove excess and make your ideas more concise. I mean, tell me, what was your idea, in its most boiled down format. What kind of thing did you set out to do? You can tell me in a very general way. For example, I thought of an idea for a game the other day, where you you have an tulpa gf, but on the 7th day she transforms, and you gotta book it out of there before yk she touched you or whatever. I think that would be pretty cool and scary, maybe she like becomes this weird kinda gestating monster and lays eggs or something, so basically the theme is that, you play as a pleasure-seeking man who only cares about the dopamine of jerking off, but on the 7th day he is confronted with the responsibility of having sex with a little tulpa over and over again, so he's, running, away, heh get it, from responsibility, or from his own home, which transforms into a maze. It's like an environment that hates you then. Maybe to further, this is how love looks like to him and without it he'd be alone, he basically needs his tulpa to mother him because he is such a fucking pathetic depraved loser who honestly deserves to die. Hey this kinda sounds like another user I know here. Fuck you. Not you chud.
I guess you can break it down, well, beats in a story, are like beats in an idea, and every detail means something, yknow? Everything in a story has to do something, and the reason that stories are so fucking cool is that they remind us of ourselves. So in that little weird fucking fleshrape story, well, it's a sober reminder of codependency. You can go on and on about this. Like even a simple little story about animals who live in an abandoned Boy Scout camp and have unionized to make a little community where the stronger animals force the weaker animals to forage and hunt, when this isn't shit they want to do, they'd rather do more creative things, or have different passions. Hey as I'm writing this, this sounds like a neet being forced into the workforce because they don't have the power to stand up for themselves. Or maybe they THINK they don't, in which now there's agency. Stakes and agency are pretty fun little ingredients, nobody likes passive characters too. So maybe one of the characters, let's say they're a mouse, mice are small, she feels small inside, makes sense. But they're also pretty smart, I mean, mice can be trained and are pretty cool I think, so this implies she has more potential than she thinks. So maybe instead of foraging, what she really wants to do is stage a play and write characters for her friends, but the more in-comnand animals, let's say they are foxes, foxes are big, powerful predators that can shred mice, and are usually a little self-centered as portrayed in fiction, and let's say the foxes try to throw cogs in her plans and foil her attempts at making a play. See where I'm going with this? And every character in a story is a unique perspective on a theme.
In this case, we can actually pull the theme from the shit I wrote, sometimes theme emerges organically withoit you ehen thinking, just because the way that different characters with different perspectives interact, will naturally generate conflict, and conflict will start to sprout the seeds of theme. In this case, you can see the story I just pulled out of my ass, is about wanting to pursue creative endeavors in a society where people have to work for civilization to continue functioning. And now, magic happens, we can have different perspectives. Maybe we can have some more animal characters that actually shun the mouse, along the lines that, if she's not foraging, she's actively making it harder for them to survive as a group! The fox believes that all creative endeavors is pointless, but only because power and control is the only thing she knows, and to see someone have fun with something so simple in her eyes, drives her nuts! And maybe the mouse has always had a passion for writing, but amplified because her animal society actively shuns her for expressing herself. Mice should be nice after all! Who ever heard of a mouse that writes! And just like that you have a bunch of different perspectives on one, single, theme. It's pretty cool! You can get all into this and have real fun with writing!